Articulate, intelligent, interesting and indicating effective independent research. You confidently and convincingly reference your own productions and real productions to justify your points.
One small revision: You could add another section on Intertextuality which is a convention of music videos (Goodwin). Here you could draw parallels to The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe which is implicitly referenced when the performer defies the laws of gravity, enters the wardrobe and finds herself in an enchanted wood as the lion!!!
Also another strong inter textual reference is in the narrative structure where you use the convention of moving image in the edit with alterations of colour; this links to The Wizard of Oz where Dorothy's real world is in stark black and white, and her fantasy world or her subconscious world is in high colour.
Level 4 Grade A; with revision as suggested could be full marks. You could also try re uploading as quite difficult to access. A pleasure to read and well done Lauren.
I'll assess tomorrow Lauren. Thanks for email me. Ms B
ReplyDeleteArticulate, intelligent, interesting and indicating effective independent research. You confidently and convincingly reference your own productions and real productions to justify your points.
ReplyDeleteOne small revision: You could add another section on Intertextuality which is a convention of music videos (Goodwin). Here you could draw parallels to The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe which is implicitly referenced when the performer defies the laws of gravity, enters the wardrobe and finds herself in an enchanted wood as the lion!!!
Also another strong inter textual reference is in the narrative structure where you use the convention of moving image in the edit with alterations of colour; this links to The Wizard of Oz where Dorothy's real world is in stark black and white, and her fantasy world or her subconscious world is in high colour.
Level 4 Grade A; with revision as suggested could be full marks. You could also try re uploading as quite difficult to access.
A pleasure to read and well done Lauren.