1) The music video conforms to Goodwin’s model in that it is both performance and concept. (See Page 15 – 16 of theory booklet. 2) Encapturing….no such word, instead your could say captivating or intriguing … 3) 3) Interesting ref to Mary Shelley’s “Frankenstein”…could you say, for example when………. 4) Slide 11, when referencing a theory avoid “believes” and instead Claude Levi’s Straus model….or quote and then (Claude Levid Straus) 5) Cinematic style…(intertextual links could be more ambitious because link to Frankenstein is far too vague) Search Peter Greenaway’s films “The Cook the Thief his Wife and Her Lover and any sequences from his other films. Also v.good knowledge for anyone going to drama school and shows ambitious to quote from more obscure but ground breaking texts) so cinematic style is very important.
Endeavour to apply media theory to your own music video because this could be what you have to do in the exams or in your evaluation.
Level 4: Intelligent, well organised, articulate and interesting and clearly you have been inspired by a splendid music video which is a feast to watch. Level 4; But note small revisions which are more for your revision for exams particularly with relation to quoting theories.
Well done clearly you have invested time in research and organisation.
Urgent: Could you please post all your case studies under label G324 Research into music videos. It is important that your blog is organised and your work under the correct labels or you will lose marks.
You need to post this case study so that I can asses it. I am aware you have been ill.
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Delete1) The music video conforms to Goodwin’s model in that it is both performance and concept. (See Page 15 – 16 of theory booklet.
ReplyDelete2) Encapturing….no such word, instead your could say captivating or intriguing …
3) 3) Interesting ref to Mary Shelley’s “Frankenstein”…could you say, for example when……….
4) Slide 11, when referencing a theory avoid “believes” and instead Claude Levi’s Straus model….or quote and then (Claude Levid Straus)
5) Cinematic style…(intertextual links could be more ambitious because link to Frankenstein is far too vague) Search Peter Greenaway’s films “The Cook the Thief his Wife and Her Lover and any sequences from his other films. Also v.good knowledge for anyone going to drama school and shows ambitious to quote from more obscure but ground breaking texts) so cinematic style is very important.
Endeavour to apply media theory to your own music video because this could be what you have to do in the exams or in your evaluation.
Level 4: Intelligent, well organised, articulate and interesting and clearly you have been inspired by a splendid music video which is a feast to watch.
Level 4; But note small revisions which are more for your revision for exams particularly with relation to quoting theories.
Well done clearly you have invested time in research and organisation.
Level 4
Urgent: Could you please post all your case studies under label G324 Research into music videos. It is important that your blog is organised and your work under the correct labels or you will lose marks.
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