An analysis at the highest level particularly with regard to historic influences on lighting, costume, action, props and etc. Splendid research is evident throughout this articulate, intelligent and enormously interesting case study. But........without any reference to media theory I am at present unable to award you the highest mark.
I suggest;
1) All aspects of inter textuality you reference and integrate the appropriate media theories into your case studies. You achieve this by adding a slide at the end where you focus on how the music video reflects aspects of the theories of genre.
2) I strongly advise you not to re-do but just add another slide.
At present Level 3 (B grade) with additions as advised top Level 4.
Well done Lauren splendid work but needs attention.
One more point, you have made excellent inter textual references, can you explain the purpose of these. Think about flattering the audience because they like to identify references to art house films; or to add another layer of meaning, to start a conversation...and so on.
An analysis at the highest level particularly with regard to historic influences on lighting, costume, action, props and etc. Splendid research is evident throughout this articulate, intelligent and enormously interesting case study. But........without any reference to media theory I am at present unable to award you the highest mark.
ReplyDeleteI suggest;
1) All aspects of inter textuality you reference and integrate the appropriate media theories into your case studies. You achieve this by adding a slide at the end where you focus on how the music video reflects aspects of the theories of genre.
2) I strongly advise you not to re-do but just add another slide.
At present Level 3 (B grade) with additions as advised top Level 4.
Well done Lauren splendid work but needs attention.
One more point, you have made excellent inter textual references, can you explain the purpose of these. Think about flattering the audience because they like to identify references to art house films; or to add another layer of meaning, to start a conversation...and so on.
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